Give the water movement in the mid to foreground. Stay away from the time lapsed look it’s not natural. Water also falls in clumps that catch air and dissipate. Show those falling clumps. Also the second little uphill rocky area in the foreground water I would just take out and smooth it out. Overall your painting looks good.
Hi Bhawna! Nice painting. I think you could make it even better by making your waterfalls fewer in number and by placing a highly contrasting “sweet spot” focal point right over the top of the central one. Good luck!