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  • Need technical critiques on this waterfall.

     Janet updated 2 weeks, 2 days ago 4 Members · 5 Posts
  • Bhawna

    Member
    December 5, 2020 at 4:48 pm

    Please let me know your critiques for this oil painting on 24 x 36 inch canvas.

  • Sally

    Member
    December 9, 2020 at 3:44 pm

    I love the softness, fantasy feel. To improve, I think a focal point is needed, and the foreground water fleshed out. The tree is stellar.

    • Bhawna

      Member
      December 9, 2020 at 5:39 pm

      Thanks Sally.

  • Al

    Administrator
    December 14, 2020 at 9:29 pm

    Give the water movement in the mid to foreground. Stay away from the time lapsed look it’s not natural. Water also falls in clumps that catch air and dissipate. Show those falling clumps. Also the second little uphill rocky area in the foreground water I would just take out and smooth it out. Overall your painting looks good.

  • Janet

    Member
    February 9, 2021 at 1:57 pm

    Hi Bhawna! Nice painting. I think you could make it even better by making your waterfalls fewer in number and by placing a highly contrasting “sweet spot” focal point right over the top of the central one. Good luck!

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